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Logo soup instead of a positioning line

PrincipleYour logo isn't your positioning. Say what you do.

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ORBITAL

ORBITAL

hello@orbital.xyz

 
1Dealbreaker
Dealbreaker
Brand-only cover

The investor knows your name and nothing else. If they close the deck here (they might), you've told them zero.

2Weakens
Weakens
Email is not a pitch

A support email address is not a substitute for a positioning line.

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The tagline that says nothing

A cover should tell a stranger what you do in one line.