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Every dealbreaker in the library

Slide-level flaws serious enough to close the deck. Ship your pitch past these first.

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Tagline says nothing
Cover

An investor reads this and still has no idea what you sell, to whom, or in what category.

from · The tagline that says nothing
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Brand-only cover
Cover

The investor knows your name and nothing else. If they close the deck here (they might), you've told them zero.

from · Logo soup instead of a positioning line
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'Broken industry' is a red flag
Problem

Every deck says this. It signals the founder hasn't found a wedge specific enough to attack.

from · Three paragraphs about a 'broken industry'
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Problem = 'you don't use us'
Problem

'There's no AI-native CRM' is the absence of your product, not a customer pain. Investors see through this.

from · A problem slide that's really a solution slide
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8 features, 0 story
Solution

A feature list tells the investor you don't know which one matters. They can't pick your wedge for you.

from · A feature firehose instead of a wedge
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These are true for everyone
Why now

A 'why now' that could be pasted into any deck in the room is not a why now.

from · 'AI is having a moment'
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This is a horoscope
Why now

'The time is right' is what founders say when they can't name the shift. Investors read it as a red flag.

from · 'The time is right' with no proof
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$1.2T = you haven't sized this
Market

Every category has a trillion-dollar top line. It tells the investor you haven't done the work to find your wedge.

from · '$1.2T TAM' with no path to it
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You haven't segmented
Market

If TAM = SAM = SOM you're saying you can sell to every customer on earth day one. Nobody believes that.

from · SAM and TAM are the same number
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No number is a number
Business model

'Freemium with upsell' is a strategy label, not a business model. Investors need to see cash flow into the company.

from · 'Freemium with enterprise upsell' and no numbers
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Take rate is a market outcome, not a plan
Business model

Investors know marketplace take rates trend to the cost of the buyer's alternative. A 20% headline take rate signals you haven't tested it.

from · 20% take rate on a market that pays 3%
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None of these pay salaries
Traction

Page views, subs, downloads: none of them tell the investor whether people are getting enough value to pay.

from · Vanity metrics with no trend
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That's a plan, not traction
Traction

Anything past today is a projection. Labeling it 'traction' erodes the founder's credibility for the rest of the deck.

from · A hockey-stick projection labeled 'traction'
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Five channels = zero channels
Go-to-market

At pre-seed/seed you cannot fund five acquisition motions. Investors read this as 'we don't know what works'.

from · 'Everywhere, everyone' GTM
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Hiring is not a GTM
Go-to-market

'Hire a VP Sales' is what founders write when they haven't sold. Investors know the first 10–20 customers must be founder-closed.

from · 'We'll hire a VP Sales'
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This is a dealbreaker phrase
Competition

Every investor has heard 'no competitors' and knows it means either the market isn't real or the founder hasn't looked.

from · 'No direct competitors'
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You don't win every row
Competition

A checkmark table where you win everything says you haven't actually looked at the competition. Investors know this.

from · The checkmark-table nobody believes
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'Passionate' is not a qualification
Team

'Full-stack engineer' and 'loves building' describe every founder ever. The investor can't tell why you'll beat 20 other teams attacking this.

from · 'Passionate team' with generic headshots
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'Serial entrepreneur' means nothing here
Team

Solo + generic = investor wonders why nobody else joined you. That's the read you have to break.

from · Solo founder with no earned advantage
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'Conservative' + 600× growth
Financials

Calling a 600× jump 'conservative' costs you credibility for the entire rest of the meeting.

from · The unexplained hockey stick
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No cash-out date is a red flag
Financials

'Aggressive hiring' + 'profitable at scale' with no burn schedule tells the investor you haven't modeled runway. That kills the round.

from · Big spend, no runway math
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There is no ask
The ask

'Thank you' is a slide, not an ask. The investor can't picture what their check buys.

from · The buried ask
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'To scale the business'
The ask

That phrase tells the investor you don't have a plan for the money. It's the single most common ask-slide mistake.

from · A number, but no use of funds
23 dealbreaker callouts across 23 teardowns.