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1Dealbreaker
Dealbreaker
Tagline says nothing
An investor reads this and still has no idea what you sell, to whom, or in what category.
Fix
Replace mission-speak with what you do + who it's for, in under 12 words.
2Weakens
Weakens
No stage, no ask, no name
The cover is the one slide every investor sees. Anonymous covers waste it.
Fix
Add stage, round size, and the person to reply to.